THESIS REVIEWER´S OPINION Student’s full name Anudari Bat-Erdene
Thesis title Financial statement and their reporting ability to management Reviewer’s name Ing. Přemysl Palka
Degree course English for Business Administration
Mode of study Daily
Thesis evaluation criteria Classification grade according to ECTS Structure
Outline and division B
Language level B
Formatting (citations, presentation) B
Content
Sources and their utilization B
Thesis statement formulation B
Methodology of analytical part (goals, methods, research type,
sample, etc.) C
Data analysis and meeting the goals D
Data interpretation and conclusions D
Vocational contribution, practical relevance D
Evaluation justification (strengths and weaknesses of thesis):
Bachelor thesis consists of theoretical and analytical part. First part defines the financial analysis of the financial statements from a theoretical point of view. Second part consists of performance analysis which was made through the financial ratios and its comparison with the direct competitor ATTP. According to the results of the financial analysis were suggested possible recommendations for improving the financial management system. As strength I see well organised and precisely conducted theoretical part and usage of a competitor for benchmarking. Student used number of different information sources that is very beneficial. Weaknesses of thesis are sometimes inaccurate comments and uncertain synthesis with inadequate number of recommendations.
Questions to be answered by student:
1) On page 26 you wrote that the company has to pay MNT 10,000,000 for new cars, that is shown in account receivables...etc. Do your really think that it affects account receivables?
2) Your thesis has three guidelines whereas the last one is about recommendations for improving the current situation. You spent half page on that problem. Do you think it is in balanced?
Overall mark* C
Date: 24.5.2010 Signature:
* Overall mark is not a mathematical average of individual marks.
