SUPERVISOR’S ASSESSMENT OF BACHELOR’S THESIS Student’s full name Monika Uhrová
Thesis title Havel in America
Supervisor’s name Gregory Jason Bell
Degree course English for Business Administration
Mode of study Full-time
Thesis evaluation criteria Classification grade according to ECTS Structure
Overall clarity and structure of the work A
Language level A
Compliance with citation and formatting norms B
Content
Thesis statement formulation A
Sources and their utilization A
Methods of processing the research problem A
Level of analytical and interpretive elements A Formulation of conclusions and meeting objectives A
Originality and vocational contribution A
Justifications for evaluation (strengths and weaknesses of thesis):
Well researched, well written, and well argued.
Errors in footnotes on pages 18 and 21.
Mandela was not non-violent. In fact, the United States and United Kingdom labelled him a terrorist.
Decline in quality on pages 19 and 20.
Overuse of the word “very.”
Barack Obama is conspicuously absent from this thesis.
In the bibliography, articles should also have been in alphabetical order.
Questions to be answered by student:
Why does Obama like Václav Havel but dislike Václav Klaus?
Why has President Miloš Zeman been referred to as the “anti-Havel?”
In your informed opinion, do you think the 2020 Czech film about Havel portrayed him accurately?
This work was checked by the plagiarism detection system Theses with the result of negative.
Overall mark** A
Date: 21.05.2021 Signature: Gregory Jason Bell
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** Overall mark does not indicate a mathematical average of individual marks.
