Posudek oponenta bakalářské práce
Studijní program:Mezinárodní ekonomické vztahy Studijní obor:International Business
Akademický rok:2020/2021
Název práce:Politické a ekonomické vztahy euroasijských zemí Řešitel:Svetlana Kim
Vedoucí práce:Ing. Aleš Lisa, Ph.D.
Oponent:Ing. Petr Vymětal, Ph.D.
Hlediska Stupeň
hodnocení
1. Stupeň splnění cíle práce 2
2. Logická stavba práce 2
3. Práce s literaturou, citace 3
4. Adekvátnost použitých metod 3
5. Hloubka analýzy ve vztahu k tématu 4
6. Vlastní přístup k řešení 3
7. Formální úprava práce 2
8. Jazyková a stylistická úprava práce 2
Konkrétní připomínky a dotazy k práci:
The topic of the bachelor thesis is actual, interesting and compatible with the study program. The main aim of the thesis is rather not ambitious and pretty simply to be filled. The topic is broad enough and the author choose a very easy way, not going deep into the issue. It is represented also in the structure of the theses – it is logical but from the content point of view it is too brief using limited number of references and documents. However, the history is appreciated in those topics, the split of the USSR can be shorter.
When the data – mostly the statistical data – are used, I’d prefer to make a table instead of putting them in the text. If the tables are used, it is not clear for what year the data were taken and I am not sure, if the column of export and import is correct (Russia and Kazakhstan) and the author fails to cite the data in correct way. Although the author is citing and the reference list is included, the style how the sources are cited are not following the ISO standard. As an opponent I positively evaluate the reflection of current problems and also the prospects to the future (monetary union).
The theses is at the edge but I recommend it for a defend and propose to grade it as GOOD if the defend will be successful.
QUESTIONS FOR THE DEFEND: 1) To what extend do you think the EAEU can be counterpower to EU and China? 2) What is the prospective of the EAEU to expend/access other countries? 3) Are there any plans for introduction common policies other than common custom measures?
Závěr: Bakalářskou práci doporučuji k obhajobě.
Navrhovaná výsledná klasifikace práce: 3
Datum: 16. 1. 2021 Ing. Petr Vymětal, Ph.D.
oponent práce
